An original song "Angels Lament"

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dYpfjnruVfg


This is a link location to a video of a song I am working on. This is music only no poetry and it is a very rough first try at recording. The quality may be a bit low and the song is in the works i.e. not a completed work but I really would like some feedback. I wrote this and am the only musician on the recording so please forgive the playing as somewhat amateurish. Thanks in advance to any and all advice and criticisms and hope some of you enjoy the song.

Hmmmmmmmm.... I like it. I have no formal training in music so I have no expertise to give criticism, but I did enjoy it and would like to hear the finalized product someday.

Upload to Soundcloud instead. Do you have each individual track? You should send them to me for some tuning and fun.  

On a purely critical note, you were... searching, obviously, towards the end. A solo reach out of the fold is great, but even it needs to be bound, and should be tempered by the underlying piece. Unless you're playing jazz. There are no rules in jazz. Friggin' hate jazz.

Seriously though, send me tracks so I can play.