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    poetry in motion

    Post by locust on Tue Sep 10, 2013 11:34 am

    Straight forward idea,I write the first line of a poem,then hopefully one after another U will each add a line of ur own....with luck we end up with a nice piece of work which we can all be proud of...
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    Re: poetry in motion

    Post by locust on Tue Sep 10, 2013 11:36 am

    Okay here's the first line

    In loves sweetest most tender of subtle embraces,
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    Re: poetry in motion

    Post by Musikaman on Tue Sep 10, 2013 11:46 am

    locust wrote:Okay here's the first line

    In loves sweetest most tender of subtle embraces,
    He flipped her over changing places.
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    Re: poetry in motion

    Post by locust on Tue Sep 10, 2013 4:24 pm

    Musikaman wrote:
    locust wrote:Okay here's the first line

    In loves sweetest most tender of subtle embraces,
    He flipped her over changing places.
    Haha...and there's the second line
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    Re: poetry in motion

    Post by Ckyle7 on Wed Sep 11, 2013 4:20 am

    Regretting nought but lover's sorrow....


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    Re: poetry in motion

    Post by locust on Wed Sep 11, 2013 1:21 pm

    Living in the now no thought giving to tomorrow

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    Post by Pig Tailed Gar on Wed Sep 11, 2013 5:36 pm

    She lick and drool then wag her tail.
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    Re: poetry in motion

    Post by Ckyle7 on Fri Sep 20, 2013 6:34 am

    And bit the bone, to no avail.


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    Re: poetry in motion

    Post by locust on Sun Sep 22, 2013 4:28 pm

    All coherent fought lost in a sorrowful wail
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    Post by Ckyle7 on Sun Sep 22, 2013 7:19 pm

    Of secrets not told, from the past's vague tale.


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    Re: poetry in motion

    Post by seven on Mon Sep 23, 2013 9:56 pm

    Of promises kept with towels and veils
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    Re: poetry in motion

    Post by Ckyle7 on Tue Sep 24, 2013 3:22 am

    Abruptly spoken, none shall pass


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    Post by Musikaman on Tue Sep 24, 2013 11:22 am

    No charms of ego or swaggered sass
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    Re: poetry in motion

    Post by Ckyle7 on Tue Sep 24, 2013 9:58 pm

    For those that hold the tattered link,


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    Post by seven on Tue Sep 24, 2013 10:31 pm

    A realm unseen, time out of sync
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    Post by Ckyle7 on Tue Sep 24, 2013 11:32 pm

    Lost, entranced, by thoughts and rhyme,


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    Post by Musikaman on Wed Sep 25, 2013 1:36 am

    Arousing movements lost in time
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    Post by Ckyle7 on Wed Sep 25, 2013 5:38 am

    Okay, someone else needs to start the next stanza, I much prefer rhyming than not.


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    Re: poetry in motion

    Post by locust on Fri Sep 27, 2013 4:11 am

    Embraced in love and feeling oh so fine
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    Post by Musikaman on Fri Sep 27, 2013 4:47 am

    Awfully similar to the very first line.
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    Post by seven on Fri Sep 27, 2013 12:34 pm

    Betwixt and between, it's all a game
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    Post by Musikaman on Fri Sep 27, 2013 12:45 pm

    Emo vocabulary challenging the sane
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    Re: poetry in motion

    Post by Ckyle7 on Sat Sep 28, 2013 12:41 am

    (Here's a double line, try to make a rhyme for them both)

    Torn along a rampaged seam,
    Illusions of another morrow.


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    Post by Musikaman on Sat Sep 28, 2013 2:29 am

    Repair every sundered dream,
    stoic front leads to naught but sorrow.
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    Re: poetry in motion

    Post by Ckyle7 on Sat Sep 28, 2013 4:44 am

    (touche)

    Slender tendrils lie within


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