HomeStraight forward idea,I write the first line of a poem,then hopefully one after another U will each add a line of ur own....with luck we end up with a nice piece of work which we can all be proud of...
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poetry in motion
locust- Posts : 310
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locust- Posts : 310
Join date : 2013-08-27
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Location : dublin Ireland
Okay here's the first line
In loves sweetest most tender of subtle embraces,
In loves sweetest most tender of subtle embraces,
Musikaman- Posts : 161
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He flipped her over changing places.locust wrote:Okay here's the first line
In loves sweetest most tender of subtle embraces,
locust- Posts : 310
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Haha...and there's the second lineMusikaman wrote:He flipped her over changing places.locust wrote:Okay here's the first line
In loves sweetest most tender of subtle embraces,
Ckyle7- Admin
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Regretting nought but lover's sorrow....
locust- Posts : 310
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Living in the now no thought giving to tomorrow
Pig Tailed Gar- Posts : 30
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She lick and drool then wag her tail.
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And bit the bone, to no avail.
locust- Posts : 310
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All coherent fought lost in a sorrowful wail
Ckyle7- Admin
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Of secrets not told, from the past's vague tale.
seven- Posts : 37
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Of promises kept with towels and veils
Ckyle7- Admin
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Abruptly spoken, none shall pass
Musikaman- Posts : 161
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No charms of ego or swaggered sass
Ckyle7- Admin
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For those that hold the tattered link,
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A realm unseen, time out of sync
Ckyle7- Admin
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Lost, entranced, by thoughts and rhyme,
Musikaman- Posts : 161
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Arousing movements lost in time
Ckyle7- Admin
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Okay, someone else needs to start the next stanza, I much prefer rhyming than not.
locust- Posts : 310
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Embraced in love and feeling oh so fine
Musikaman- Posts : 161
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Awfully similar to the very first line.
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Betwixt and between, it's all a game
Musikaman- Posts : 161
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Emo vocabulary challenging the sane
Ckyle7- Admin
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(Here's a double line, try to make a rhyme for them both)
Torn along a rampaged seam,
Illusions of another morrow.
Torn along a rampaged seam,
Illusions of another morrow.
Musikaman- Posts : 161
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Repair every sundered dream,
stoic front leads to naught but sorrow.
stoic front leads to naught but sorrow.
Ckyle7- Admin
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(touche)
Slender tendrils lie within
Slender tendrils lie within
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